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The Echo

The whole story of Episode 4, the way Maya tells it, with Leo interrupting. Read it aloud at bedtime, or follow along while you listen.

Episode 4 · Season 1About 17 minutes to read aloudAges 4–8Braver · scare 2 of 3

Maya

There’s a rule at my school about sharing. I thought it was a Ms. Okafor rule.

It’s older than that. Because when Bea said "mine" — something said it back.

The closet: “Mine!”

Maya

Hi. It’s Maya. Welcome to Maya and the Fog.

Leo

And Leo. Who was there.

Maya

As a reading buddy.

Leo

It’s a very important job.

Maya

You read one page.

Leo

It was a long page.

Maya

Okay. Before we start. This one’s different. My friends are in it. Bea, and Ashi, and Twiggy. And Leo’s friend Lucas.

Leo

Luke.

Maya

Lucas. So there’s more people to be scared. And it happened at school. In the daytime. With the lights on.

If you have a hand — hold it. If you don’t, hold your own. That counts.

Leo

Also there’s a closet.

Maya

Don’t tell them about the closet.

Leo

For the record, echoes are physics.

Maya

Leo. It said it in Bea’s voice. Then it said it in mine.

Fog day

Ms. Okafor

Indoor recess, friends. Fog day. Nobody’s going out in that. The sharing shelf is open — and the shelf rule is?

Ashi

Everything on the shelf is everybody’s.

Ms. Okafor

Everything on the shelf is everybody’s. Thank you, Ashi. I’ll be at the office for two minutes. Be kind.

Maya

Okay. So. Indoor recess. Me, Bea, Ashi and Twiggy, at the sharing shelf, with a rule, and no grown-up. That lasted about four seconds.

Bea

Blue ones! The blue blocks are out! Nobody touch the blue ones. No! Mine!

Ashi

You have to share the blue ones. That’s the shelf rule. She just said it.

Bea

I am sharing. I’m sharing them with me.

Ashi

That’s not how sharing works.

Bea

Uh huh. It’s how this sharing works.

Twiggy

I don’t need any blocks.

Bea

Good.

Twiggy

Oh — wait. Actually. Bea, could I please have one? Just one?

Bea

No.

Twiggy

The ugly one? With the bite mark? Please?

Bea

Especially not the ugly one. The ugly one’s my favourite.

Maya

You can’t have a favourite ugly one.

Bea

Watch me.

Maya

Fine. Then I get the glitter markers. All six. Even the gold one.

Milo

Maya? Can I please have the gold one?

Maya

Uh uh. It’s mine.

Ashi

Maya.

Maya

I said it nicely.

Milo

She did say it nicely.

Ashi

Okay. I’m making a list. Bea: all the blue blocks. Maya: all the markers. Twiggy: nothing.

Twiggy

By choice.

Ashi

Me: the rules.

Bea

You can keep the rules. Actually — give me the list.

Ashi

Hey! That’s — Bea! Give it back!

Bea

Hey! Mine!

Ashi

That’s it. I’m telling Ms. Okafor.

Bea

She’s at the office.

Ashi

I’m telling her later.

Bea

Tell her this. The blue ones are mine! The ugly one is mine! The list is mine! Everything I’m holding is —

MINE!

The closet: “Mine!”

Bea

WHAT was that?!

Ashi

The lights — did you see the lights? The lights went off — they went off when it —

Maya

They flickered. They flickered when it said it. Who said that? Bea, who said that?

Bea

Not me! I mean — me. The first one was me. The second one was not me.

Maya

Nobody else is in here. It’s just us. It’s always just us.

Twiggy

Something said "mine" back.

Ashi

…Bea. Say it again.

Bea

Mine.

Ashi

See? Nothing. It was probably just the heater. And the lights do that. The lights do that all the time.

Twiggy

Bea? Could I please have the ugly one now?

Bea

No. Mine.

The closet: “Mine.”

Ashi

The lights. The lights did it again. Okay. Nope. Nope nope nope nope nope.

Bea

Did you hear that? It said "mine" again! It said it in my voice! Why does it have my voice?

Maya

It was little. Like somebody behind the bookshelf, whispering "mine" back, in Bea’s voice. A little bit late. And a little bit lower.

Ashi

It’s the heater. The heater makes a noise. Heaters make noises.

Twiggy

The heater doesn’t know the word "mine."

Bea

Okay. Okay, that’s — okay.

I’m going to draw. I’m going to draw a sun, because it’s a fog day and there isn’t one. Maya, can I please borrow the gold marker? Just for the sun. I’ll give it right back, I promise.

Ashi

Bea. Don’t.

Bea

Maya.

Maya

…No. It’s mine.

The closet: “Mine.”

Bea

…That was you. It said "mine" in your voice.

Ashi

And the lights went almost all the way out that time. It’s getting worse. Every time, it’s getting worse.

Maya

It was. It was my voice. Lower than the others. Slower. Like it had been waiting for that one.

Ashi

You said it on purpose. You said it on purpose, Maya.

Maya

I wanted to see.

That’s what I told them. I also just didn’t want to give her the gold one.

Ashi

Okay. Okay okay okay. New rule! Nobody says "mine." Nobody says it, nobody whispers it, nobody spells it.

Bea

You just said it.

Ashi

I’m allowed. I’m the rule.

Twiggy

Hm.

Ashi

No — wait. Wait. It didn’t do it when Bea said it to nobody. It did it when Twiggy asked and Bea said no. It did it when Bea asked Maya and Maya said no.

Twiggy

It only says "mine" back when somebody wants the thing.

Ashi

It’s not the word. It’s the not sharing.

Bea

Then I’m not sharing and not talking. Problem solved.

Lucas

Hi! Hi, we’re your reading buddies! I’m Lucas, this is Leo, that’s Junie, and I brought a book about fog. It’s nonfiction. It has facts. Leo, who’s your reading buddy?

Leo

My sister. I’ve had her for five years.

Junie

Ms. Okafor said sit on the rug, so — that’s where I’ll be. Sitting. On the rug.

Bea

Junie. Junie. Ask Lucas for his book. Don’t ask why, just ask him, and then listen.

Junie

Lucas? Could I please see your book? Pretty please?

Lucas

What? No! Mine!

The closet: “Mine!”

Lucas

What — what was that? It said "mine"! It said "mine" in my voice! Leo! Leo, did you hear it? That was my voice!

Junie

…Okay. The lights. Somebody tell me the lights always do that.

Ashi

They don’t.

Leo

That was an echo, Luke. Obviously that was an echo. Echoes are sound bouncing off flat surfaces. This room has a lot of flat surfaces. It’s physics.

Bea

The "mine" came a second late, and it came back lower, and echoes don’t do that!

Leo

Big room. Big, low room.

Twiggy

The voice came from the closet.

Maya

The coat closet. Where the coats go. Where nobody goes, because it’s full of coats. And there was fog. Coming out under the door. Inside. On the floor of our classroom.

Junie

Last year a kid said "mine" about a cupcake in here and nobody’s seen him since.

Ashi

That’s not true.

Junie

Then where’s Devin?

Ashi

Mm-hm. Devin moved.

Junie

That’s what they’d say.

It gets later

Maya

Here’s the thing about a room full of kindergartners on a fog day. Everybody wants something somebody else has. And everybody says no.

Junie

Milo, could I please hold your dinosaur? Just for a second?

Milo

No! Mine!

The closet: “Mine!”

Lucas

Ashi, could I please borrow your pencil? Mine’s —

Ashi

No! Mine! Sorry. Reflex.

The closet: “Mine!”

Maya

And every single time — it said "mine" back. And every time, a little bit later. And a little bit lower. And then Bea had an idea, which is never good.

Bea

Everybody! Game! On three, everybody ask somebody for something, as nice as you can — and then yell "no, mine!" as loud as you can. One, two —

Ashi

That is the opposite of the shelf rule.

Bea

— three! Twiggy, go!

Twiggy

Bea, may I please have one block?

Bea

No! MINE!

Lucas

Junie, can I please try on your hair clip?

Junie

No! MINE!

Milo

Leo, can I please have your glasses?

Leo

I’m not playing.

Milo

Say it!

Leo

No. Mine.

Lucas

Maya! Maya, may I please, please have the gold marker?

Maya

No! MINE!

The closet: “Mine!”

Bea

…That was only one. We all said it. It only said one back.

Junie

Okay. That’s not the heater. Heaters don’t turn the lights off.

Milo

I want Ms. Okafor. I want Ms. Okafor to come back.

Ashi

It could still be the heater.

Twiggy

It’s not echoing anymore. It’s answering. Somebody says "mine," and it says "mine" like it means it.

Maya

That’s the part I didn’t like. When Bea said "mine," the room said "mine" back in Bea’s voice. When everybody said it, six of us, all at once — it picked one voice. It picked mine.

Twiggy

It picked you.

Maya

Why me?

Twiggy

You have the gold one. Everybody wants the gold one.

Bea

It’s a him. I’ve decided. His name is Gerald.

Ashi

You can’t name it.

Bea

I already did. Gerald, say "mine."

He’s shy.

Twiggy

He’s not shy. Nobody’s asking for anything. Bea? Please may I have the ugly one?

Bea

…No. It’s mine.

The closet: “Mine.”

Bea

…He’s not shy.

Ms. Okafor

Friends, I’m back. Why is everybody whispering. Never mind — the office needs me again. Buddies are in charge. Junie, you’re the grown-up.

Junie

Great.

Maya

That’s when Milo went to his cubby.

Milo

My dinosaur’s gone. My dinosaur was in my cubby and it’s gone.

Leo

Did you look under —

Milo

It’s a cubby. There’s no under.

Bea

Wait. My blocks. I put the blue ones in my cubby so nobody would — they’re gone.

Maya

The markers. I put them in mine. They’re gone.

Ashi

Okay. Everybody stop. I’m making a list. A new list, because somebody took my old one.

Bea

It was a good list.

Ashi

Milo’s dinosaur. Bea’s blue blocks. Maya’s glitter markers. My pencil. I’m writing this with a crayon. Junie — Junie, what’s gone?

Junie

My hair clip. The good one.

Ashi

Junie’s good hair clip. Twiggy?

Twiggy

I still have my nothing.

Junie

Her mug’s gone. Ms. Okafor’s mug. The one that says "world’s okayest teacher."

Twiggy

She said "mine" about it. This morning. When Milo asked for a sip. I heard.

Ashi

Ms. Okafor’s mug. That’s a grown-up thing. It takes grown-up things.

So. Everything on the list — is a thing somebody asked for. And somebody said "mine."

Leo

Coincidence has a very strong track record.

Lucas

Page nine. Page nine! "Fog creatures are collectors. Like magpies. They take what is held too tightly." That’s basically what happened!

Leo

Who wrote that.

Lucas

It says "a friend."

Leo

That’s not an author.

Lucas

It’s a friend, Leo.

Maya

And I’m standing at my cubby, and I’m thinking: it took the markers. It took the blocks. It took a dinosaur. What if it takes the thing I’d say "mine" about the most? What if it takes Bea?

The closet

Ashi

The lights did that on their own. Nobody said anything. Nobody said anything and they did it anyway.

Leo

Fog day. The power’s —

— the power’s fine, actually.

Maya

It sounded like someone dragging things. Lots of little things. Across carpet. Toward the closet.

Bea

Gerald’s cleaning up.

Twiggy

Gerald’s collecting.

Ashi

Okay. Step one: nobody moves. Step two: we count the things that are gone. Step three: we get Ms. Okafor.

Junie

She’s at the office.

Ashi

Then step three is us.

Bea

I’m going to look.

Ashi

That’s step one! You’re breaking step one!

Leo

If you think about it acoustically —

Lucas

Leo. Not now.

Leo

…Later, then.

The closet: “Mine.”

Maya

And then it said them. All of them. Every "mine" anybody said all day. At the same time. In everybody’s voice.

Bea

That one’s mine. That one’s Milo’s. That one’s — that’s Ms. Okafor’s. She said it about her coffee.

Milo

I don’t like it. I don’t like it, I want to go home.

Ashi

Nobody move. Milo, hold my hand. Nobody move.

Maya

And then the closet door opened. By itself. One inch.

Twiggy

It’s very organized in there.

Maya

She was right. It was. Everything was stacked. Blue blocks in a tower. The markers in a row. The dinosaur on top, like it was in charge. And on every single thing, a little whisper, going round and round. Mine. Mine. Mine.

Lucas

It’s keeping them.

Bea

Gerald. Buddy. Give Milo his dinosaur back and we’ll call it even.

Ashi

It’s not a buddy.

Bea

Everybody’s a buddy if you say it nice.

…That was a no.

Maya

And I thought: it’s going to keep it. All of it. And when it runs out of things — what if somebody asks for something that isn’t a thing? What if somebody asks for Bea, and I say "mine"?

Leo

Maya. Get back from the door.

Bea

I’m going in.

Ashi

Bea. That’s step one.

Bea

…Fine.

The cure

Maya

Okay. Okay okay. It took the things we said "mine" about — when somebody asked. So the rule isn’t Ms. Okafor’s rule. It’s older. Whatever you won’t share when somebody asks — it keeps.

Ashi

So we share.

Bea

I don’t know how.

Ashi

You say it. Out loud. To a person.

Bea

That’s not a thing.

Ashi

It’s the whole thing!

Maya

Here’s the thing about the gold one. It was the only gold one. In the whole school. And Bea had asked me for it, and I’d said the word to her face. So it had to be her.

I’ll go first. Bea. The glitter markers. You can have them. All six. Even the gold one.

The closet: “Ours.”

Lucas

It said ours.

Maya

And the markers came out. Rolled out. Under the door. All six. Gold one last.

Milo

Do me. Do the dinosaur.

Maya

It has to be yours, Milo. You have to give it.

Milo

…Junie can have my dinosaur.

Junie

I don’t want your dinosaur.

Milo

You have to take it, that’s how it works!

Okay. Can I please have it back now?

Junie

Fine. Great. It’s mine now. Wait —

The closet: “Mine.”

Leo

Don’t say that word again.

Junie

Ours. Ours. I meant ours. Milo, it’s ours, take it, it’s ours.

The closet: “Ours.”

Junie

…That’s my clip. That’s the good one.

Lucas

Ashi? Could I please borrow your pencil now?

Ashi

It’s in the closet, Lucas. But yes. You can borrow my pencil. You can keep my pencil.

The closet: “Ours.”

Lucas

It rolled right to me!

Twiggy

I’d like to share too.

Ashi

You don’t have anything, Twiggy.

Twiggy

I know. Bea. You can have my nothing.

Bea

…Thank you?

The closet: “Ours.”

Ashi

That doesn’t count.

Maya

It said "ours." It said "ours," so it counted.

Ashi

Bea.

Bea

No.

Ashi

Bea. Bea, could I please have the blue blocks?

Bea

You’re bad at towers.

Ashi

I am excellent at towers.

Bea

Ashi. You can have the blue blocks. Not because you said. Because you’re bad at towers and you need them more.

Ashi

That’s not sharing.

Bea

It’s the closest I’ve got!

Maya

And the blocks came out. Clattering. Every blue one. And the closet was almost empty. Almost.

Lucas

There’s one more thing in there. It’s big and it’s squishy.

Leo

I didn’t say "mine" about anything.

Lucas

You said it about the beanbag. The reading-corner beanbag. Every time we visit, every single time, you get there first and you say it. Leo, can I please have the beanbag?

Leo

…The beanbag is mine.

The closet: “Mine.”

Maya

It said "mine" back. In Leo’s voice. Low. And Leo heard it. I watched him hear it.

Leo

Luke. You can have the beanbag.

Lucas

You’ve never let me have the beanbag.

Leo

Don’t make it a thing.

Maya

And the beanbag came out. Slowly. Like it was heavy. And the door shut. And the fog went back under it, the way water goes down a drain.

Ms. Okafor

Friends. You cleaned up? Who are you people.

Maya

So here’s how it ended. Everything went back on the sharing shelf. Everything. The dinosaur, the markers, the good hair clip, Ashi’s pencil. Ms. Okafor’s mug came back after she told Milo he could have a sip. She doesn’t know why that worked. We do. Except one thing didn’t go back.

Bea

I kept one blue block. The ugly one. With the bite mark.

Ashi

You can’t —

Bea

Gerald let me. I asked nicely. I said "please can I keep the ugly one," and it didn’t say anything. That’s a yes.

Twiggy

It’s a yes.

Ashi

It’s a yes.

Leo

For the record. Echoes are still physics.

Maya

It gave you back your beanbag, Leo.

Leo

…Physics is generous.

Ms. Okafor

Also — why is there fog in my closet?

Junie

Devin.

Ms. Okafor

Devin moved, Junie.

Junie

That’s what they’d say.

Maya

That’s the story. Everybody shares now. At school. Mostly.

But here’s the thing. That night, at home. Moose had his bone. And Leo went to take it —

Leo

Moose. Share.

Maya

It growled back. In Moose’s growl. Lower.

See you next time. In the fog.

Questions to talk about in the morning